Well here is one of my decks

[killerdragon]

Monsters-23

Barrel Dragon x2
Penguin Soldier x1
Masked Dragon x3
Berserk Gorilla x2
Man-Eater Bug x2
Old Vinidict Magician x2
Magician of Faith x2
Dark Ruler Ha Des
Luster Dragon x2
Jowls of Dark Demise
Dancing Fairy
Wall of Illusion
Yomi Ship
Gemini Elf
King Tiger Wanghu

Magic-12
Premature Burial
Nobleman of Crossout x2
Ekibyo Drakmord x2
Mystical Space Typhoone
Axe of Dispair x2
Swords of Revealing Light
Diferent Dimension Capsule
Giant Trunade
Tribute to the Doomed

Traps-10
Widesread Ruin
Seven tools of the Bandit
Magic Jammer
Raigeki Break x2
Magic Cylinder
Negate attack
Michizure
Call of the Haunted
Spellbinding Circle

[GryphonDarkFalcon]

substitute ur man eater bugs for noble man eater bugs, take out seven tools and add a pot of greed

[bluepokenut]

Here is what I see;

[glow=green,2,300]monsters[/glow]
23 is too steep. There are far too many monsters that will only live 1 turn. This puts you at a monster disadvantage., not a good thing. 7 of the 23 are flip effects. Almost 1/3. Too many. Drop 5, you choise.

[glow=yellow,2,300]Spells[/glow]
You are missing 2 major cards, pot of greed and graceful charity. These 2 are a must. You also need MST and heavy storm. I see why you dont have heavy storm in it. You have too many traps.

[glow=purple,2,300]Traps[/glow]

Widesread Ruin
Negate attack
Michizure *
Spellbinding Circle *
*= might keep

Drop the other 2, the other 2 up to you.

[GryphonDarkFalcon]

well i think that u need more effect monsters than you do normal monsters, but that is my opinion, but u really need either pot of greed or at least a graceful charity

[bluepokenut]

Effect monsters are fine. Spear dragon is a effect monster. Gorilla is a effect monster.To many Flip effect and/or 1 turn monsters will do you in without aLOT of support.

[Skull]

well I have played against this deck befor and it works very well, but I do have a few suggestions.

Take out:
Wall of Illusion (since so many people have really strong monsters now)
Gemini Elf (not a very good one, replace for spirit reaper)
King Tiger Wanghu
Dancing Fairy

Negate attack ( switch out for waboku)
Spellbinding Circle (switch out for Nightmare Wheel)

That will give you a good deck and a good deck count.