Need Help Modifying my deck

[Killerdragon]

Well what scarthman said is right i want to make a dragon deck. It doesn't really matter if it is a beat down or field control or what type it is. well here are the new cards in my deck:

Monsters-18

Blue-Eyes White Dragon
The Fiend Megacyber
Giant Soldier of Stone
Man-Eater Bug (2)
7 Colored Fish
Spear Cretin
Relinquished
Sonic Bird
Dancing Fairy
King Tiger Wanghu
Magician of Faith (2)
Beast of Talwar
Summoned Skull
Neo the Magic Swordsman
Tyrant Dragon
Maha Vailo

Magic-13

Black Illusion Ritual
Offerings to the Doomed
Premature Burial
Pot of Greed
Change of Heart
Dark Core
Mystical Space Typhoon
Different Dimenshion Capsule
Axe of Dispair
Swords of Revealing Light
Nobleman of Crossout
Horn of the Unicorn
Black Pendant

Traps-10

Seven Tools of the Bandit
The Dragon's Bead
Trap hole
Raigeki Break (2)
Waboku
Spellbinding Circle
Michizure
Magic Cylinder
Magic Jammer

I don't have all the cards i want for my dragon deck so i am buying them this Saturday. Iwill try to buy the Dragon Roar. I know where i can get it for 10$.

[Skull]

Blue- I am sorry for posting in the deck doctor section, I just can't help looking at a deck with so many cards and not trying to help with it.

Ok, first of all, you have way too many cards. You should only have about 17-20 monsters, 10-16 traps, and 5-9 traps. But this can change depending on the kind of deck. That is all I am going to do. Blue can do the rest.

[bluepokenut]

I'LL cut you some slack this time..

First off what scarthman said is right on the money.
Here is what you need to decied if you want to make a good deck:
1. What kind of deck do I want? Do you like dragon, beast, women cards. Sometimes what cards you have and how many of them you have will decied that for you.

2. What style deck do I want to play? Their are several deck "types". Beatdown, monster control, field control are just a few.

3. What cards do I REALLY want in my deck? If you have a favorite card that you just have to have in the deck make sure it is at least kinda useful.

With this and what scarthman have said you will have a better deck right off.

If you will answer these things for me it will help me help you. Just modify your first topic with these things then PM me and we can get to work.

[Skull]

Well I am just going to help you a little bit blue. I talked to him today and he wants a dragon deck. He dosn't have very good dragon monsters so I told him to just hold off on the dragon deck until he gets enough proper cards to make one. It also lookes like he is trying to go for a beat down. So a Dragon Beatdown won't be too hard to make. I did shrink the deck he has here to 40 today so it's a little better. I tried to get him to take out relinquished but he said he must have it. So I let him keep it. But that information should help you a little bit since he can't post on the deck doctor section.

P.S. I messed up on my first post, It says Traps 10-16, and then it says traps 5-9. But I meant to say Spells 10-16, then traps 5-9. Just so everyone understands.

[bluepokenut]

If its a dragon deck you want here is the best thing to do.

Get the dragons roar structure deck. It has the basics the you need to have a good deck. Really for $12 it is the best way to start in this game.

[Skull]

Well He is going to a tournament at Caveman this weekend and he is going to buy the Dragon's roar deck. I fixed his deck, what do you think of it as of now?