here is my deck please help me fixing it

[obelisk]

Monsters:18
Archfiend soldier x1
magician of faith x1
cyber jar x1
mobius the frost monarch x1
gemini elf x3
gagagigo x1
witch of the black forest x1
sangan x1
jinzo x1
insect knight x1
yata garasu x1
dark blade x1
luster dragon x1
invader of darkness x1
tribe-infecting virus x1
goblin attack force x1


magic:15
Mystical space x1
graceful charity x1
raigeki x1
change of heart x1
monster reborn x1
dark hole x1
premature burial x1
heavy storm x1
pot of greed x1
nobleman of crossout x2
Swords of revealing light x1
card destruction x1
confiscation x1
snatch steal x1
axe of despair x1
fairy meteor crush x1

traps:5
waboku:2
magic cylinders x1
torrential tribute x1
call of the haunted x1

[bluepokenut]

Ok a traditional deck. Have seen a deck with ban cards in it in a long time. Let me see what I can do.

looks kinda like a beat down with yata for a lock.
Drop these
mystical elf
man eater bug
traps need some work.
Drop these
thunder of ruler x1
Dark spirits of the silent x1
drop off x1
Mirror wall x1 ( might keep)
Jar of greed x1
Magic jammer x1
then add
Ring of destruction
Imperial order
lighting vortex
premature burial
call of the haunted
mirror force
snatch steal
torrential tribute