Beastly Beating Deck (PLZ FIX)

[decklessman]

ok this deck needs some fating up and need to be good so i can [glow=red,2,300]BEAT[/glow] ppl at leagues in my town


[glow=red,2,300]Monster[/glow]
3x Berserk Gorilla
3x Enraged Battle Ox
1x Spirit Reaper
3x Mad Dog of Darkness
1x King Tiger Wanghu
1x Manticore of Darkness
1x Dark Cat with White Tail
2x Bazoo the Soul-Eater
[glow=red,2,300]Trap[/glow]
1x Mirror Force
1x Torrential Tribute
1x Trap Jammer
1x Call of the Haunted
1x Tools of the Bandit
[glow=red,2,300]Magic[/glow]
1x Heavy Storm
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Snatch Steal
1x Premature Burial



[glow=red,2,300][shadow=red,left,300]i need as such help as possible[/shadow][/glow]

[bluepokenut]

Ok you are at 24 cards. Lets put this thing on a high protien diet.

MONSTERS
Lets add in a couple of monsters.
jinzo
fusler dragon
Fusler is used more to special summon. That way he will be at 2800.

TRAPS

Your traps are ok. I would drop the trap jammer and add in a ring of destruction.
2 ultimate offering (get more monsters to the field fast)

SPELLS

this area need some punch. Add these in:
2 book of moon (nice help for battle ox)
graceful charity
pot of greed
nobleman of crossout 1 or 2 up to you
swords
2 smashing ground
lighting vortex
delinquent duo
brain control
giant trunade

This will be a pretty good beat down.