rate and fix my tourny deck

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18 monsters:

tributes 4:

summond skull
mobius the frost monarch
jinzo
vampire lord

non tributes 14:

archfiend soldier
archfiend soldier
archfiend soldier
gemini elf
gemini elf
gemini elf
luster dragon
luster dragon
magician of faith
insect knight
cyber jar
goblin attack force
dark jeroid
tribe infecting virus

magic 16:

premature burial
mind control
graceful charity
heavy storm
brain control
card destruction
pot of greed
axe of despair
axe of despair
swords of revealing light
mystical space typhoon
united we stand
lightning vortex
snatch steal
nobleman of crossout
nobleman of crossout

traps 6:

waboku
waboku
magic cylinders
call of the haunted
ring of destruction
torrential tribute