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Post by Skull on Nov 12, 2004 17:17:02 GMT -5
I wrote a book and it's about these 3 scientists that have to go explore this old Pyramid Ruin. 2 of them get captured and one of them gets killed. It's a great story. Tell me what you think of it. (you will have to look at the next posts to see the rest of the story because it is too long to fit on one post). some of the names of the character I got off the cards so since they are copyrighted, I had to change the lettering a little.
The Story of the Three Sphinx
There was a loud screech from behind us as we walked down the large broken pathway. Scientist’s Rob Alpha, Cody Gamma, and Seth Beta were all walking in a line as dust and debris fell from the walls of the Great Ancient Pyramid of Light. Beta stops with a look of confusion. “Where are we?”. And Alpha pulls out a map of this ancient pyramid from his over-sized backpack. “uhhhh...... I don’t know, this place isn’t on the map. Gamma, you have a more accurate map of this ancient structure, why don’t you see if you can find where he are.” As alpha was getting into his pocket for his map, he had found before they entered, and couldn’t find it. He checked his other pocket and nothing. “Maybe it fell out while I was walking.” “I told you, you should not have worn pants with pockets that are so loose. It probably slowly just slid out of your pocket and fell in one of the tunnels. Take my lantern and go look for it.” Beta sounded very mad after just telling alpha where they would be going today and what he should ware. As Alpha left, Gamma said to Beta, “It’s probably not very safe for him to go off alone in these old pyramid halls. We should really go with him to make sure he is safe.” Beta replied in a rude way, “it’s not my fault that he’s stupid and doesn’t listen to me. I am smarter and have more experience in jobs like these. If he gets killed then that’s his fault, he should have listened to me and not worn lose pants.” As Gamma and Beta continued down the long, dark hallways, they would hear chains clinking together at a rapid pace and loud screeches nearby. Because of Beta still being mad at Alpha, he thought it was just him trying to get back at Beta for getting so mad at him. They continued to walk as the sounds got louder and closer. Then it stopped. Gamma turned around, starting to get a bad feeling that something is following them. Beta turned around as well to see why Gamma had stopped.
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Post by Skull on Nov 12, 2004 17:18:31 GMT -5
“Gamma, lets go! We are supposed to be trying to find artifacts and writing! LET’S GO!” Gamma said, whispering, “Beta, do you hear that?” “No, why, what do you hear?” “Nothing.” “Then lets go!” “But there was just a bunch of sounds and now, nothing, absolutely nothing.” Beta tried to look off into the dark trying to see if there was anything there but it was too dark to see. Gamma suggested that they go look what’s there but Beta said no. Gamma was starting to be able to tell that Beta was afraid, he had a shiver sound in his voice and was trying to get Gamma to leave this are fast. They both turned around and started walking. They walking about 30 feet when they heard the sounds of the screeches and chains in front of them now. And then the sounds came from behind. Then Beta told Gamma to try to look for some way to escape. As they ran around looking closely at the walls for some way to escape. They Sounds were coming closer and getting louder. And then it stopped. They couldn’t hear anything, Gamma said, “I don’t think that’s Alpha, hey look at the wall!” The wall started to change form and started to make letters. The letters changed into words and the words changed into a Story of the ancient times. It spoke of two great sphinx gods and 1 great sphinx goddess. The Two great sphinxes Gods were Androx Sphinx and Thienen The great Sphinx. The Goddess was an enchanting sphinx master, Sphinx Telleia. Beta was very exited because this is what they came to find. Gamma began to read, “Over ten million years ago, two great sphinx ruled the Egypt times. The great sphinx Goddess, Sphinx Telleia, defended the great pyramid that had their ultimate ruler’s soul living inside. And The All-powerful sphinx God, Androx Sphinx, killed unwanted and unworthy visitors and soul robbers. The two Sphinx’s worked together in a team to guard their ruler. The soul robbers have stolen the soul of their Ruler, but the great speed of Androx was no match for the robbers. If these two great Sphinxes’ are to be killed then their great ruler will reassemble himself, using the souls of his two great guards. Once the two great guards were pulled into a different dimension by a deadly disease called Ectoplasmers. It is a slime that takes the bodies of the infected host to a new dimension, in which they must battle to the death. The Luster Servants of the Pyramid of Light then must guard the pyramid of any trespassers. But on the different dimension of where the two great sphinx gods are at must choose 5 of their strongest Luster servants. Androx chose Servant #12, servant #3, and servant #46. Telleia chose Servant #2 and Servant #47. They both thought that the five servants that they chose would help them in battle. But the kings of the other dimension then said that they must chose one of the five Luster Servants to help them in battle. First Androx said that it should be #3, but Telleia said #47. Androx figured that #3 is fast but #47 is really strong and works good with big weapons. So they agreed on #47. Androx then wondered what would happen to the rest of them, so he asked the king. The king replied, “This is just the first part of my trap, The rest of our precious Servants will be killed. But if you are to win, then their lives will be saved. They will all return to the original place that they were pulled from.” The king then announced that the Sphinx team must select a weapon. They had a choice of An Axe or a call that can be used to call the haunted to destroy whatever is defeating you. But there was also a spirit Barrier, If they the sphinx are to use this then they will have a strong shield to protect them from spirits of all types. They chose the Axe and gave it to the Luster Servant. The Sphinx team was ready for battle. The team that they had to fight against was a single giant plant. The plant chose the Call to Haunted. The battle started. The Plant called for help right away from the dead spirits of evil. There was 3 spirits and they all looked alike. The plant ordered one of the spirits to kill the servant. Teleia, as the defender she is, took one big swipe of her claws and killed the spirit. But since it was a spirit it comes back and in a stronger form. The battle rages on and Androx goes for the plant. Running at top speed towards the evil plant, it grabs Telleia and uses her to block Androx’s attack but as the plant is busy using all of it’s vines to protect itself, the servant takes his only chance of getting the plant and takes his axe and lifts if up high. He Swings down with great speed and power, but instantly one of the spirits fly’s over to block the attack on the plant. The spirit was destroyed but now as the servant expects the spirit to come back from one of the three tombstones behind the plant, one tomb stone decinigrated. Now the servant knows what he must do. He now knows that if he takes a swing at the plant, then a spirit will fly in the way. He goes to take another strike at the plant, a spirit didn’t fly in the way, The plant still had Telleia in it’s grip and putting the great Sphinx Goddess in the way of his Axe, slicing The Goddess in half. As the blood of the goddess spilled on the floor of the stadium, Androx moved to the back of the stadium for protection. The servant followed Androx but was too slow and was captured by the plant. The plant then threw the servant into the empty space of where the other spirit used to come from. Then as a new tombstone appeared, The servant came out as a spirit and still had the axe. Then the 3 spirits Flew recklessly toward the Sphinx God. And attacked. Then on at the Pyramid of light, Everything started to shake. The top of the pyramid had fallen and broken into many pieces. Then the soul of The Great Ruler, Thienen The Great Sphinx, broke out of his Pyramid and sent himself to the other dimension. He arrived at the bloody Stadium. By taking half of each of the two Sphinx guards that were killed, and making an ultimate Beast. Then putting his soul inside of the Great Ruler. This single Sphinx God is now two times as strong, two times as big, and two times as powerful. This Sphinx must make an offering of 500 of his servants to combine with him to make him much stronger. But such an offering makes him have powers beyond all belief.
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Post by Skull on Nov 12, 2004 17:19:23 GMT -5
This one Great ruler took one huge swipe of his claws to kill the plant. But the spirits fly in the way but the great power of this Sphinx Ruler kills all three of the spirits and slices the plant into four different pieces. The plant fell and drool oozed out of it’s mouth. The King of the other dimension was Surprised to see something so powerful and big. A creature the size of that one could defeat even the mightiest monsters in all dimensions. The lives of the 5 servants were revived and the all of the servants and the Great ruler were sent back to the Pyramid of light. The great ruler got killed four million years later by the soul robbers. His soul remains with them up to this day, and they still walk through these halls. A great reward will be given to the ones who can free the soul of the Great Sphinx God.” “Well that was interesting.” Said Gamma. Bata said, “yes, hey... do you think it’s those soul robbers that we are hearing?” “I don’t know, but it sounds very scary.” “What, the story?” “No, the sounds.” “oh.” Then they heard the sounds of the chains again. And now they could see six black figures walking towards them. As they came closer they could get a better look at the. And it wasn’t the Soul Robbers they say it was the Spirit of the dead servants. They had something in chains but we couldn’t identify it. Then there was a bright light coming from behind all of the dead servants. It was Alpha. Beta yelled, “Alpha! What are you doing! You are supposed to be finding the map!” “Well sorry, I was looking for it and then these guys caught me.” “Hey, marauding People! Let him go. He is of no harm to you!”. The servants turned and looked at Gamma and Beta with their glowing eyes. One of them slowly approached us and pulled a large glass ball from his pocket. The Luster Servant holding the glass ball rolled it to Gamma and Beta. Beta picked it up, worried about what might happen. They both stared into the ball and the or the sphinx came alive. It was put into an animated form and they watched it through the glass ball. They saw the battle, the Great sphinx Guards, the servant who fought at their side, and the evil plant with it’s spirit’s helping him. Then they saw the king, it looked a lot like Alpha! He was cheering the great plant to kill the sphinx Gods and then the King could then rule the Dimension of which they came. Gamma said, “Those servants must think that Alpha is the king and they are probably going to kill him.” “Well, we have to save him.” said Gamma. The glass ball then turned to dust and the servants began walking away. Gamma went running after the servants and Beta did the same. Alpha then fell as if he were killed. Beta Jumped and pulled one of the servants to the ground and then the servant disappeared. Gamma ran towards another servant and hit it on the back, making it fly into the wall then that one disappeared. Then the rest of the servants turned towards Gamma and Beta and came flying to them very fast. The servants then also disappeared and then Gamma was lifted off the floor of the Pyramid and was pulled down the halls until Beta couldn’t see him anymore. Beta was going to chase after him, but at the speed that he was going, gamma could never catch up with him. So he went over to Alpha, and then Alpha whispered, “are they gone?” “yes” said Beta. Then Alpha stood up with the chains still tied to his arms, legs, and neck and tried to pull off all the chains. The chains were somehow welded together making it impossible for them to just take them off. They would need to be cut off but they didn’t bring anything to cut chains with. Beta told alpha that the something took Gamma down that hall. Beta asked Gamma, “Did you ever find the map?” “no, the servants got me right after I left. I had just gotten where I couldn’t see you or Gamma anymore and the servants captured me. I must have fainted because I woke up on the ground and with chains on me. And I was being dragged on the ground.” “Well we have to find Gamma.” “ok.” They both walked down the large halls until they ended up at a large wall with three ancient items setting on shelves. The item on the Top of the shelf was a pot. It was a very large pot with an evil looking face. It had a large grin and designs all over it. It was green and the teeth were yellow. It’s eyes were red and they squinted right at you. Then below that shelf and to the left about a foot, was a mask. The shelf had a large stick coming out of the shelf and the mask hung from it. The mask was a dark green color and had a small mouth with many sharp teeth. The mask had an odd shape on it’s forehead and had nails stabbing through it’s eyes and two more stabbing through each cheek. It had snake like designs and was very big. Then on the lowest shelf, on the far right side, was a ring. The ring had bright yellow and red flames coming out of it. The ring was not like any ordinary ring, it was about three feet wide all around. The fire from the ring could help us lead the way but it was too big and heavy to carry. The pot looked very valuable but at the time they had no use for it. Then the mask looked like the faces of the Servants, and it also looked dangerous. Beta said that they should choose the pot, but Alpha wanted the ring. He knew it was too heavy but he know it was most likely the most valuable item on all of the three shelves. Then Beta noticed that there was an empty shelve. It burn marks on the wall where the item was, so it probably was some type of item with fire. It looked like it was in the same shape as the Ring on the third shelf. Alpha took the ring off the shelf and then the wall began to sink into the ground. Beta tried to grab the pot but as he went to grab it, a door opened inside the wall and the last two items fell inside. The wall sunk completely into the ground and that made another tunnel. Beta began to walk and the wall then started to come back up so they both quickly ran into the hidden passage. Inside of the hidden passage, the ring that Alpha picked up lit the whole hall. They walked and they came to a large room. In The room, there were three doors. Each door had a sign next to it, the fist one read, “the dark door”, the second one read, “The door of hope”, and the third one read, “The door of light”. They both agreed that they would not take the dark door. And the door of hope sounded like their best chance. But above each door said something, the Dark door said, “Pot of the Greedy needed”, The second one said “Ring of Light Destruction needed”, and the third one said, “Mask of the Dead needed.” They both new what door they had to go through and to their convenience, it was the door they wanted. Beta started to walk toward the wall but Alpha walked ahead of him. They walked through the door and the place was so bright and filled with light, they didn’t need the Ring. But Alpha kept it anyway. They walked for a long time and then found paintings on the walls of the Sphinx Gods and Goddess. On Telleia, there was blood crossing the middle part of her body of where she got sliced in half. It had a picture of the Giant plant holding her to block Androx’s attack and you could also see the three spirits next to the giant plant. Then on the floor it showed the Pyramid of Light breaking apart to let out Thienen The Great Sphinx. It showed his soul exploding out of the top of the broken Pyramid. On the opposite wall, Thienen was putting together his body with the two dead Sphinx guards. On the ceiling, It showed Thienen cutting the plant and the spirits which led him to victory. Beta began taking many pictures of the walls and Alpha just stood there, looking at the detail of the pictures. Once Beta was done taking pictures, they walked down the hall and found a pit of boiling water. It was very odd to find boiling water in a pyramid ruin.
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Post by Skull on Nov 12, 2004 17:21:19 GMT -5
And what really confused Alpha and Beta was, it was boiling, what could possibly make water boil. Alpha suggested a volcanic vent at the bottom of the pit. Beta took out a test tube and got a sample of the water. The water still boiled inside of the tube. Because of the Extreme heat of the water, it built pressure in the tube making the top explode off and the glass tube broke. Although Beta needed a sample of the water, it was too hot to get a sample of. But Alpha said, “Why don’t you just get the water inside of the tube and keep the cap off until it cools? Then put the cap on the tube and you will have your sample.” Beta did that, he got a sample in the tube and waited. He waited for about 15 minutes and the tube started to melt. They both then knew that they would be able to get a sample. But the Pit of water was also blocking their way to rest of the hall way. Alpha made a suggestion of using ropes and connecting them the walls and going across the pit like that. Beta took ropes from his backpack and Alpha took ropes out of his backpack to. The both crossed on opposite walls. Alpha was on the right wall and Beta was on the Left wall. Alpha grabbed the wall and connected the first part of his rope. Beta did the same. The got across the pit and were very sweaty from all the heat and steam from the water. They both gathered their ropes and put them back inside of their backpacks. Then they continued. They got to a very large room and Gamma was in the middle. He was tied to the floor and the ropes tied to him were connected to large axes. If they were to cut the ropes then the axes would cut them into pieces. The ring’s fire that Alpha was holding was starting to run out. And as the fire started to run out the light in the room began to dim. They thought that the light in the place they were at was powered by some kind of mystical power. But it was actually the fire that powered a kind of super light that lit all of the rooms and hallways. They needed to get Gamma and leave the area before they couldn’t see anymore. They thought if they could get the ropes off fast enough and get him out of there, they wouldn’t get killed. They didn’t have anything to cut the ropes with but Gamma said that he had a small Japanese sword in his pocket. Beta pulled it out of his pocket and took it out of it’s case. Alpha held the case and started running for the wall, because it was the only safe place from the Axes. Beta Cut the ropes and they both ran towards Alpha but then large walls formed around them so they couldn’t escape. The first Axe hit the walls that surrounded them and then it got dark. Alpha’s ring ran out of fire and could not light up the room anymore. Gamma and Beta could hear the Axes coming toward them. Another Axe hit the wall and the top part of the wall fell. A large crack formed across the middle of the small wall that was trapping them. Then the whole room lit up and a loud roar echoed throughout the room, then another roar. The floor started to shake. Gamma and Beta could hear the ropes of the axes snap. Another Axe hit the wall of the place they were trapped and then that whole wall fell. They heard three more ropes snap and then a roar. They felt something very large pound against the ground. Then another axe hit the wall and then that wall fell. They began to run out and looked back. They saw Androx and Telleia! Telleia was laying on the ground in a puddle of blood. There was an axe stuck in the side of her. Alpha was on Andro’s shoulder. Andro picked up Gamma and Beta and broke the side of the pyramid and set them on the ground on the outside of the pyramid. Beta took a few pictures of the Great sphinx as it walked into the pyramid. It picked up Telleia and carried her outside of the pyramid. Beta took some more pictures and Alpha and Gamma watched with and amazed look on their face. Androx kneeled down and held Telleia up, he looked toward the ground and closed his eyes. A large beam of light came down and Telleia was lifted out of his hands and was pulled into the sky. She was lifted up until you couldn’t see her anymore. Then A large arrow from the Sun, came down and stabbed Androx in the back and he fell to the ground. Alpha began to walk up the Androx and Beta followed. Alpha put his hand on the arm of the great sphinx and pulled his hand away. Beta got a small sample of the blood that was oozing down the side of the sphinxes body. Beta had high-tech cloning technology in his lab and was going to clone the sphinx. He also got a smaller sample of Telleia’s blood from Andro’s hands. He carefully tucked the two tubes of blood away into his pocket and then a large beam of light came down, and Androx began to lift up in the sky just like Telleia. He disappeared and Gamma pulled something out of his pocket. Gamma said, “Beta. What do you think this is? I pulled it off of one of the servants. It looks like a claw.” Beta took it and looked at it carefully and examined it. He new that it was a claw, but if the servants were only ghosts, then it can’t be real. Alpha took it from Beta and looked at it. He also agreed that it was a claw but couldn’t believe that because the servants were only ghosts.
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Post by Skull on Nov 12, 2004 17:22:12 GMT -5
Beta said, ¡§Alpha, if you were the first one to be captured, you were in contact with the servants more than Gamma. Where exactly were they held by the servants?¡¨ ¡§They held my shoulders, my arms, and parts of my neck.¡¨ Beta took a hand-held microscope, a small pair of tweezers, and a small test tube. He examined Alpha¡¦s arms and shoulder and found small skin particles. Beta told Gamma to hold the test tube and Beta put the skin particles inside. Beta got particles from his arms and shoulders but couldn¡¦t find any on his neck. Then he had Gamma hold the tube and asked Alpha, ¡§Where did the servants touch you at?¡¨ ¡§Alpha said, ¡§The were holding we up by my feet and hands. I was also blind folded.¡¨ So Beta looked for particles on his feet first. He didn¡¦t find anything on his feet but his hands had many particles and even a few pieces of hair. Beta put the pieces into the tube and Gamma put the cap on it. Beta labeled the tubes so he knows what are in them. They walked on the desert sand to the road and stopped. Alpha took his cell phone out of his pocket and called their friend from the lab to come and get them. Alpha, Gamma, and Beta waited their for almost an hour before he got there. His name was Valgearion. He was a very tall and muscular man who use to study the ancient art of the samurai. He always carries a large sword with him. He asked Beta, ¡§So, Beta, did you find anything?¡¨ ¡§Yes, but some of the stuff we found was very strange. Alpha has one of the artifacts we found. It is a giant ring. It use to let out flames and it is what led us to the room that we ended out search in a near death situation.¡¨ Gamma said, ¡§Yes. A giant sphinx god saved us. We have photographic proof that we saw them.¡¨ Valgearrion replied, sounding very confused, ¡§What!? That¡¦s impossible! It is impossible for some giant sphinx god to just appear and save your lives.¡¨ ¡§We have photographic proof¡¨ Beta said, ¡§I even have blood samples. Now we can finally test that new cloning machine.¡¨ They drove along the desert road and eventually got to the lab. Gamma was developing Beta¡¦s Pictures and Alpha was testing the skin particles and hair pieces. Beta was getting DNA from the blood of the Sphinx Gods. He found DNA but it was in a odd form. It wasn¡¦t like a twisted ladder, it was in the shape of a normal ladder, not twisted at all. Beta examined the blood and DNA. He got two needles and put them inside of the blood. He let them set there to see if there would be a reaction to the blood. And all of the DNA started gathering around the needle and getting stuck to it. This made it easy to get the DNA for the cloning. He got the two sets of DNA needed for a clone and put them in a small hole to make the new sphinxes. The cloning takes thirty days to finish. While Alpha was testing, Valgearion was watching Gamma develop the photos, because that is what He was most interested in at the time. Alpha Yelled out, ¡§THEY¡¦RE PEOPLE, THEY¡¦RE PEOPLE!¡¨ Gamma and Beta ran over to Alpha to see why he was yelling. Beta asked Alpha, ¡§Why are you yelling?¡¨ ¡§I have just discovered that those servants are actually people! My DNA tests on the skin came out positive. We have to go back and ask them some questions. That is, if we can catch them.¡¨ Beta replied, ¡§I agree. If these are just people, then they are committing a huge crime. They tried to murder Alpha, they took Gamma. That could lead to a huge fine and at least twenty years of jail time.¡¨ Valgearion said, ¡§Well if they are people, then what about those sphinx gods you are talking about. For all you know they could be giant robots that are made to let out fake blood with fake copies of DNA.¡¨ Then there was a loud bang on the door of the lab. Gamma opened the door and there was nothing there. He closed the door and somebody knocked on the door. He opened it again. Once again, nobody. He went outside to try to look for someone and the door slammed shut. Alpha ran to the door to see what happened and the door was jammed. Valgearion got his sword and started to cut away at the door. The door was breaking into pieces very fast and then when there was a hole big enough to fit through, Alpha jumped out and started looking around. He didn¡¦t see anything. He started to walk around the lab building and then looked at the car. All of the tires have been taken off. Beta Yelled and called Alpha and Valgearion. Alpha got to Beta first and beta looked like he had just been scared to death. Then Valkyrion got there. And Beta said, ¡§Look at the wall.¡¨ Alpha and Valgearion looked at the wall and gasped. Gamma was hung and had his legs cut off. Next to him, on the wall of the lab building, was a message written in his blood. The message said, ƒãƒäƒÑƒéƒnƒÑƒçƒÑƒéƒnƒÖƒâƒßƒÝƒnƒßƒåƒâƒnƒÀƒéƒâƒÑƒÝƒÙƒÔƒnƒßƒâƒnƒéƒßƒåƒnƒçƒÙƒÜƒÜƒnƒÑƒÜƒãƒßƒnƒÔƒÙƒÕ, it was written in a different language but Valgearion studies these kinds of languages and can easily translate it. ¡§It says. Stay out of our Pyramid or you will die to.¡¨ Beta said, ¡§Valgearion, you need to come with us to the pyramid. We can all bring guns. You can use your sword if you want.¡¨ ¡§Yes... We must capture whoever killed Gamma. Hey, Gamma still had that roll of film in his hands. Those people took it. We he didn¡¦t start to develop the photo¡¦s yet, he was still getting the machine ready.¡¨ They stood there and stared at Gamma¡¦s body. Then they heard the door of their lab slam shut. They all ran over to the door and the door was replaced with a new one. Valgearion Pulled out his sword and held it up high to get as powerful of a swing as he could. He held it up and then They heard a loud Bang from a far away hill. Then Valgearion¡¦s sword blade was shot off at the hands. They saw somebody on the hill, and now they can¡¦t get inside of their lab or escape. Then the ground started to shake. The shaking was far away, Beta looked over at the sniper on the hill and the top of the hill exploded and sand flew everywhere. Then when the distant sky cleared of the sand, we saw the greatest of all the Sphinx gods. It was Thienen The Great Sphinx. He was able to see people that we couldn¡¦t. He opened his mouth and let out a huge lazer beam from his mouth and zapped all of the people that we couldn¡¦t see. He got three on the hill behind us, two that were hiding under the sand, one that was behind out car, and four on top of our lab. Then he reached his hand way up into the sky and then the sky started to turn black. It got really dark and then lightning started to shoot from his hands, and into the sky. Then a large beam of light came from the sky and went over Gamma. Gamma was lifted high into the sky and The lightning from Thgeanen¡¦s hands hit Gamma and began to revive him. He was put back together and then was given life. He came back to the ground in a white cape and a magical flute embraced in his hand. It had seven keys and when Gamma landed on the ground, he began to play the song of enchantment. Yellow and bright green waves of magic were coming out of the keys and the end of the flute. The waves of magic floated up into the air and then they all heard a roar. Then the clouds cleared and a Huge white dragon flew down and landed next to Gamma. The dragon was very shiny and had huge blue eyes. Gamma Named the dragon, Blue Eyes, because of it¡¦s big blue eyes. Gamma walked to Alpha and Beta and said, ¡§I am alive again. Theinen revived me. I was given this magical flute for my own protection. After dying, I needed something powerful, but can be used as a distance. When I was dead, I was in a world with the great Sphinxes and servants. The servants are the ones that called Theinen to come and revive me. I am suppose to live for about another thirty years.¡¨ They took Gamma to his bed inside of the lab to get some rest and inside was a chest. All of the people were gone. Alpha opened the chest and on top was a note, the note read, Dear scientist¡¦s, The sphinx gods will be there for you in your time of need. The small one you call Gamma is the chosen one. He was equipted with a flute that has powers beyond all belief. I have set in this chest, all of the missing artifacts you need. The thieves that tried to rob you once will never return. I have also given you an accurate map of the Pyramid of Light. You may explore it at your own free will.
Your Savior, Thienen
Beta looked through the chest and found the pot of the greedy, The Mask of the dead, a sample of the boiling water, the roll of film that the people stole, and some hidden ancient sphinx gold. And at the back of the note, a map of the Pyramid. Although, they didn¡¦t need the map anymore they kept it for further studies. And they continued their research on the items that they collected and the ones that the sphinx gave them. Thirty Days later
¡§Alpha, Gamma, Valgearion! Come Here!¡¨ They all ran outside and standing before them was the clones of the sphinxes. Beta had them set out in the front of their lab so they could guard the lab like they guarded the Pyramid of light in their Ancient Times.
The End
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Post by Skull on Nov 12, 2004 17:26:07 GMT -5
I wrote this story for my cousin who loves yugioh and almost died. He Nearly drowned while fishing in a lake. And even now he still plays yugioh.
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Post by rftigers01 on Nov 16, 2004 17:30:57 GMT -5
That was an interesting story. Sorry about your cousin, but at least he is ok. Maybe you should have it published or something.
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Post by Skull on Nov 16, 2004 18:04:21 GMT -5
thanks. I am going to get it punlished soon. I need to have it checked so It's good and dosn't have any mistakes in it. And I'm glad you liked it. I have been writing short stories for about 2 years now.
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Post by GryphonDarkFalcon on May 26, 2005 1:44:42 GMT -5
come on scarth is that the best u can do, u need to stay within ur area of expertise, like fishing, not science, half of ur story had no point value, it would be very hard to publish
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Post by Skull on May 27, 2005 19:13:38 GMT -5
I can't write about fishing, but I love science and stuff like this, I also got it published already, it's not selling much yet, but there are only 200 coppies made so far. I have sold 72 or them.
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